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what went wrong
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:48:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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What Did I Do?
What Went Wrong?
We We Were So Happy On The Night Of Our Prom
When I Looked In Your Eyes I Know My Dream Had Come True
But Then You Left'Left Me In The Rain
Left Me With All My Pain
I Have Become ill And Will Soon Be Dead
i'll Be Dead By Tomorrow With All Of My Sorrow
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paul_x_walker
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2005-04-23 00:48:14]
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Re: what went wrong
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:01:12 AM AEST
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Lmao Jennifer you silly girl.
You did really well for only being 11 years old.but it still needs work .
And you should try a different user name.
You have a boy name as your yser name.so see if you could can change your name on here honey.
Hugs
love mom |
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Re: what went wrong
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:17:32 AM AEST
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Oh by the way i know you have a crush on paul walker but this is like crazy .
lol please change your user name.
love mom |
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Re: what went wrong
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:46:36 AM AEST
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Jennifer ure a tiny 11 years old. This is absolutely great for a first write. You've got alot of potential. Keep writing. I will be sure to look out for more of ur work. You go girl.
Fantastic try for first attempt.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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