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Where are you?
Contributed by
ruthy
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:39:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I'm so sick of loving you babe
I've never been so patient before
I dont think I can take anymore
sitting in the rain outside your door
where are you?
So now I leave not sure where I stand
alone,
by myself
holding noones hand
sitting one the beach
touching the sand
hearing the waves sweep and i cry
where are you?.......
Copyright ©
ruthy
... [
2005-04-22 19:39:39]
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Re: Where are you?
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:21:51 PM AEST
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short but sweet (and sad)....i like
~kc~ |
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Re: Where are you?
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:26:43 PM AEST
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| Awww, okay this sucks. Not the poem, its just that when I write sad poems I don' cry while writing them, but when I read sad poems like these, I cry like the baby I was seventeen years ago. VERY good work. 5 out of 5 from me. I loved this. |
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Re: Where are you?
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:30:44 PM AEST
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| yes the feeling is not the most pleasant one, but the poem is amazing |
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Re: Where are you?
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by Nos_Bunny on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:02:03 PM AEST
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| Makes me feel sad as its so beutiful :( -You will always be a good friend to me Ruthy- |
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