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WHAT I LOVE MOST ABOUT YOU!
Contributed by
BravePen
on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Here i'm once again in my bed
Struggles and worries infesting my head
When everyone is enjoying the sky so blue
Alone and all i can think about is you
One question i'm dying to know how to solve
2 years passed !Why am i still involved?!!
What is it that i love most about you ?
Your frozen heart or being untrue ?
The way you enjoy watching my tears
or how you succed wasting my years
The smile as you know who's in control
Or the endless lies everytime i call
The love you pretend but assure on the phone
Or my instant smiles turning to frown
the mails you say u'll always send
Or the hours on my computer in vain i spend
The nights you sleep careless as a child
While i'm awake fighting the gloom so wild
Your picture under my pillow i gaze and kiss goodnight
When you forgot how i look like because i'm out of sight
The pride you stole from my innocent heart
Or how i'm stuck even if we're apart
Your happy life and maybe another girl
Or my loneliness and mind left in a twirl
Your indifference being away from here
Or my weakness everytime your voice i hear
The only promise i live for every day
Or your many exuses in different ways
If i ever found out you'll watch me stand
Facing my old love because it will be the End.
Copyright ©
BravePen
... [
2002-12-24 20:30:00]
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Re: WHAT I LOVE MOST ABOUT YOU!
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 08:04:27 PM AEST
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I could have sworn i've read this somewhere....i hope things get better for you either way.....sad write here my friend...
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Re: WHAT I LOVE MOST ABOUT YOU!
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:26:40 PM AEST
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What i meant when i said i swore i've read this somewhere before......all i meant was my first thought was that this poem was posted twice, but i checked and it's not..so that was my mistake.......i think someone else wrote one similiar to this one though ......either way i didnt want people thinking that you copied this poem from anywhere....my deepest apologies for anyone who misunderstood....this is a beautiful poem and i look forward to the next write....
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