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The Emptiness Of My Soul pt.2
Contributed by
Luckycharm
on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 03:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Comfort,
Was what I felt with u,
But now things have changed,
U begin to raise your voice at me,
Like I'm a little child,
Hate is what I feel,
Everytime I see a picture of u,
Hear u speak or hear your name,
I become hurt,
Because even though u don't understand me,
I'm still finding it in my heart to love u,
Or even care about u,
Last time I heard you speak,
I felt like I wanted to break,
Into tiny pieces,
And u would never see me again,
I've been asking myself how could u do this to me,
Everytime u make me mad,
I can't cry because there's no reason,
To cry over someone,
That seems like they don't,
Love u back,
You are the reason why,
My emotions keep building up,
And they never seem to go away,
I thought I finally found someone to love,
Still, I was wrong,
To even let u become apart of my life,
It's like u become a dream to me,
Cause you are so surrealistic in my eyes,
I've been running from the one person,
Who broke my heart and laughed in my face,
It was u who made feelings like these,
To come about,
Strong is what I've been striving to be,
For so long,
I remain lost and still ashamed,
So I ask u this one question,
Why do u continue to keep playing,
With the emotion of me?,
Your like the remedy that made,
Me complete,
And as the second arrow is shot,
Into my bleeding heart,
I then begin to cry and I,
Can no longer hold in the pain,
My tears begin to form into,
Deep blue seas,
And not even a memory,
Can make me happy,
Can't u see?,
I was in need of u but u,
Pushed me a side,
So u could love someone else,
We love each other then,
We begin to hate each other,
The lust we once had,
Is now gone,
When u touch me I feel a certain vibe,
And it begins to burn,
On the inside of me,
You were once my love,
My soulmate, heart,
And my destiny,
All I wanted was for u,
To tell me that u loved me,
But what's the use,
Through my smile I cry,
Love now is like a,
Deadly poison in the depths,
Of my soul,
A ring of hell forms around me,
But in the end a gate,
Of heaven let's me be free,
Now I've finally survived,
What u did to me and now the tables have turned,
I've overcame,
The Emptiness of my Soul
Copyright ©
Luckycharm
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2005-04-22 15:45:36]
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Re: The Emptiness Of My Soul pt.2
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by Daniels_Princess on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:19:46 PM AEST
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I really liked the almost-end of this..lol..
Love now is like a,
Deadly poison in the depths,
Of my soul,
A ring of hell forms around me,
But in the end a gate,
Of heaven let's me be free,
That part! Yea..I liked that a lot..This piece was good, its something that many people can relate to. Nicely done my dear. |
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Re: The Emptiness Of My Soul pt.2
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:30:41 PM AEST
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Sad,but beautifully written
God Bless |
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