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crying tears for you.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:16:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Oh how i miss you so m uch that i cry tears for you.. I wished that i had you still in my life.But now you are gone so
far away and i dont know when i will be ever to see your face again, You are so miss by me. That i cry so many
tears for you. When i think of all the times we had it makes me smile, but i am still sad without you in my life.
you always maded me smile and i could tell you anything to make you laugh.. But there isnt any of you anymore
so now all i do is cry tears for you.
Written By... Butterflygirl40.Email Me At Autumn2859@yahoo.c om
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Re: crying tears for you.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:28:43 AM AEST (User
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Butterflygirl40
Meaningful write your feelings of sadness really jump out.
I think if this rymed better it would be a better read. Also capatalize your I's instead of using i. You do have a lot to offer young lady and I hope you continue posting.I look foward to reading more of your works.
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