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Will My Life Live On
Contributed by
sride686
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:31:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It will be a dark night and a dark day
When my life ends and I inter the grave
But I do not fear that day of cold
Just wonder how my stories to be told
When I知 died and gone will my story live on
For I want a life that will be told
That people will want like a peace of gold
But not a life of fame and lust
For these two things people never trust
When my life is lost will they count the coast
Will they write my words as words of truth
Or will my words only reflect my youth
I tried to be a worthy man
I tried to live my life through His plan
When my life is through what will they do
Who痴 lives have I truly touched
Am I in their hearts and in their trust
For if I知 in their hearts I値l never die
I値l have eternal life with eternal pride
When I知 died and gone will my life live on
Copyright ﾂｩ
sride686
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Re: Will My Life Live On
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by inoc on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:54:23 AM AEST
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A facinating poem...yes it makes one think...what will people think....when one is gone...[I believe though when we die that is not it!]
cheers!~ |
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Re: Will My Life Live On
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by badgurlinoz on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:36:23 AM AEST
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| interesting write , thanks for sharing |
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Re: Will My Life Live On
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by marshmalloska on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:40:38 AM AEST
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| certainly makes you think doesnt it, thankyou for sharing indeed. =) |
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Re: Will My Life Live On
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:40:19 AM AEST
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An outstanding write which has the reader thinking twice, by how they want to be remembered by. A wonderfully conveyed poem.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: Will My Life Live On
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:54:05 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem. the message on this was just powerful.
I loved it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Will My Life Live On
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:41:53 PM AEST
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A fascinating peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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