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The Castaway
Contributed by
TheLoner
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:42:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This is the sea of lost dreams
Here a searcher clings to false hope
Unable to swim while holding on
But at least it keeps him afloat.
Copyright ©
TheLoner
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2005-04-22 01:42:58]
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Re: The Castaway
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:45:11 AM AEST
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| Good write even though it is short. I enjoyed it. Welcome the the site! I look forward to reading more work from you! :-) |
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Re: The Castaway
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:48:31 AM AEST
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Welcome, welcome, welcome.
Awesome write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Castaway
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 02:43:34 AM AEST
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very interesting write.
well done. |
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Re: The Castaway
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by EROTICADARLIN on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:55:49 AM AEST
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| WELCOME TO THE SITE. I AM NEW HERE AS WELL. NEVER SAY NEVER CAUSE NO ONE KNOWS WHAT THE FUTURE HOLDS FOR THEM!! GOOD LUCK! |
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Re: The Castaway
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by sride686 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:24:13 AM AEST
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| Welcome to the site and I hope to see more of your writes. Very sort write but really shows your struggle. I enjoyed this read and hope to see more….Steve |
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Re: The Castaway
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:57:12 PM AEST
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Once you stay afloat, that's all that matters for now..... short and sweet...
Jenni |
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Re: The Castaway
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by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 01:31:37 PM AEST
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SHORT AND TO THE POINT
SCOTT |
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