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Star light, Star bright...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 11:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the midst of the night
I watch for you in the sky
Blazing with glory
Way up high
You consummate the moon
With the beauty you possess
A priceless precious gem
You are I must confess
Sometimes the clouds cover you
But your beauty still out shines
Behind the blanketed covers
Of the clouds silver lines
I feel your presence
Through your shining light
As you glow radiantly
In the midst of the night
You touch my fragile heart
My loving dream star
Like heavenly aura
A love from afar...
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-04-21 23:45:29]
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 11:51:58 PM AEST
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| I love this piece. It's so sincere and lovely. Beautiful work, as always. :-) |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:23:28 AM AEST
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This is an amazing beautiful poem. It's really loving and so sweet.
Scott |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:27:16 AM AEST
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awww so sweet and amazingly beautiful.
you did well. |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:33:59 AM AEST
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STAR LIGHT,STAR BRIGHT-YOU TAKE THE DARK FROM MY HEART WITH THE LOVE OF A LIGHT! HOW FAR,JUST MIGHT,DEPEND ON THE MARK,YOU MAKE IN THE NIGHT!!
ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM I LOVED IT!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 02:48:40 AM AEST
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A dremay starlite write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by inoc on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 04:30:44 AM AEST
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A magical dreamy write...
oh ....it is heavenly!
that person is a lucky one!
cheers!` |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by dvsnme816 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 04:40:02 AM AEST
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WOW, that was exquisite material that grabbed my heart and soul. It is undefinable what is felt within the heart but I can say it burns hot with the flame of passion. A poem of complexity written by the hands of a "star-gazer" ;) . That was some work that has had some thought put into it, huh. I loved it, it was something to make me smile for the rest of the day. I hope to read some more poems from you soon...
XOXOXO.
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by EROTICADARLIN on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:09:51 AM AEST
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| GREAT POEM! |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:29:14 AM AEST
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Sue
I love this poem it is well written and magical!!
Hugs,
Leia |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:04:06 AM AEST
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A very special write.
I can feel the emotion and...longing?
Well written! |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:59:27 PM AEST
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Devine . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Star light, Star bright...
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:36:40 AM AEST
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This was such an incredible write, so lovely and perfect.
There's nothing else to say really, this was just perfection in every single way.
Jane |
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