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Back Of The Class
Contributed by
Vermillion
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 09:53:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Back Of The Class
sitting in the back of the class
feeling my life burning fast
got a gun in my backpack
feel my world fade to black
i got jock itch in my trigger finger
feel the need to cut the lives that linger
jump up! kick over a desk
aim for the teacher BANG right in her chest
see them scatter,my how flattered i am
see them run,run run as fast as you can
i got the cross hairs on an old friend of mine
poems about teen shootings is so last columbine
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2005-04-21 21:53:28]
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Re: Back Of The Class
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by thegurl on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:16:32 PM AEST
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| super cool....this puts me in the shoes of the shooter.....it almost makes me want to do it next. |
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Re: Back Of The Class
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:31:50 AM AEST
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A real thought provoking piece of immensely deep dark poetry. Sends chills down my spine. Well written though.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: Back Of The Class
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:04:49 AM AEST
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an interesting dark piece.
nicely done... |
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Re: Back Of The Class
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by AfterLivingDeath on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:11:28 AM AEST
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short, sweat, and to the point. very good right.
~ALD~ |
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Re: Back Of The Class
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 05:38:36 PM AEST
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| LOL for some reason i find this hilarious. good job ^_^ |
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