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MY DESTINY
Contributed by
concrete_rose
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 09:00:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If i could choose how to live my life, I'd choose to live it with you, I wouldn't want anything else, but to find myself beside you
If i could choose any sound in the world, I would choose to hear your voice, without your voice to provide for my heart, nothing of me is left, I mind as well be deaf, without your voice of kindness, i rather live in silence
If i could choose any feeling in the world, I would choose the feeling of you, of which i love so much, if not i rather have no touch
Because only your arms can keep me from harm, just the sight of your presence fills me with charm, If i can't feel your arms around me, then i rather not feel at all
If i could choose any smell in the world, i'd choose the smell of you, if i can't smell your body sweetness, then whats' the use of a sense of smell, if its only fillled with incompleteness
If i could choose any taste in the world, i would choose the taste of your lips, if i can't taste your lips, then its' a step towards heaven i'll just have to miss
If i could choose one thing to look at forever, i would choose to look at your face, you are simply a treasure with endless shine, that i searched deep in the earth's soil to find, if i can't look at your face forever, then i'd rather go blind
You are my senses, my everything, please keep supplying the joy you bring, you are the pieces to my puzzled heart that completes me, you're the only one thats best for me, my only path towards a journey of eternity, i cherish thee, my destiny
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Re: MY DESTINY
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:37:55 AM AEST
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This is breath takingly beautiful. a divine piece of poetry so eloquently written.
Well done.
Hugs,
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Re: MY DESTINY
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:22:34 PM AEST
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Wow!!! This is sure one lucky person!! To have this written for them.....wow....
Awesome write. I love it!!!
Jenni |
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