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MISSING YOU
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:40:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If missing you could blacken stars
there'd be no midnight show
If missing you could make it rain
the seas would overflow
If missing you could make it hot
there'd be deserts all around
If missing you silence noise
the earth would have no sound
And so i go now dreaming of
when i'm holding and kissing you
For only my heart can feel how much it hurts
when my love is missing you
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Re: MISSING YOU
(User Rating: 1 ) by mina-1 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:21:08 AM AEST (User
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A sad, heart wrenching write. Full of deep emotion and expressed so well. I love the way u convey ur work. It's absolutely great.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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