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DEW DROP OF DREAMS
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:50:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Picture this my sweet
the dew dripping from
a petal as the sun breaks
Embarking on a new day
revealing the nights secrets
Day dawning, your eyes unchained
open them my love we'll unmask
new desires to be had
Heart throbs, calling your name
longing for your delicate touch
just once more for the ages
Recall please the memories
of others, as sweet, loving as
ours? Not close i would bet
You've captured my heart, my soul
now take them with you as you
dream
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
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2005-04-21 19:50:35]
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Re: DEW DROP OF DREAMS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:53:05 PM AEST
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lovely imagery, and an overall great write. I love how you start this to. Brings the reader in really well.
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Re: DEW DROP OF DREAMS
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:56:01 PM AEST
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beautiful and soft, a lovely write
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Re: DEW DROP OF DREAMS
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by Cupid on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:51:07 PM AEST
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This has beautiful language, sweetoccasion29!
It was the title that drew me to this poem.
Thank you for sharing your art with us.
Keep up the fabulous work! |
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Re: DEW DROP OF DREAMS
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by greeneyes on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 09:29:53 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, from your heart. Sometimes all we have is dreams. Thank you for sharing.
Nancy |
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