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Relisation of a lost soul
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:49:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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sitting
dreaming
silently screaming
eye's break
tears fall
i cant stop my walls
from falling
hurting
all my fears
mixed with many tears
the insanity of it all
i think i understand now
im just sitting here
awaiting the fatality
i have been waiting to scream
loud and strong
for far to long
its haunting me now
from the depths of my eternal soul
.....i am so weak!!
how did i last so long?
the foundations of my mind
holding up my life
my only sanctuary
but its built on shifting sands
and the crap never stoped raining
its beating down
on this last outpost of sanity
and the sands are shifting
it just keeps falling
been this way for 17 ******* years
and i gave up hope it would stop
sitting
waiting
wishing
.......its still raining on me
falling so soft
i swear it hurts so gently
and it just wont stop
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Re: Relisation of a lost soul
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:56:59 PM AEST
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Deffinitly a pwerful write, sad but powerful. The line
"I swear it hurts so gentally"
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Re: Relisation of a lost soul
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:11:57 AM AEST
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| awesome write, well done |
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Re: Relisation of a lost soul
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:29:33 PM AEST
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| Really nice works...I like it. Scorp. |
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