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BROKEN SILENCE
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sounds of passion breaths of love
now changed to silence
moment devoured by your words
Silence broken by a sirens cry
how I see you now forever changed
Words you've spoke "find someone
new" are you serious? Is this how we end?
Do you hear the pain, see the tears from a
heart you've broke.
One million times over I gave myself to you
suffered my body to your touch, was this
no more to you, than collections for debts made?
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sweetoccasion29
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2005-04-21 19:36:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: BROKEN SILENCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:20:51 PM AEST (User
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its beautifully written, yet the ending left me flat as in regards to love, 'collections for debts made' is not romantic to me, but the first two stanzas are amazing:) hugs n' love nessa
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