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Have I Told You ?
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:26:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
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Have I told you that you’re beautiful?
For certainly you are
Have I told you, you shine brighter than
any other star?
Have I told you that I think you might be
larger than life,
and that I’m glad
you choose to be
here with me tonight?
Have I told you that I think I see my future
in your eyes,
That I live now only to hear your soft,
contented sighs?
Have I told you I was lost before you came
into my life,
and how much it means
for you to be
here with me tonight?
When you’re in my arms,
I feel there’s nothing I can’t do
Everything I have, I know
I want to share with you
When I hear my name upon your lips
When you touch me with your fingertips
I know
It ain’t wrong,
and I’m right where I belong
Have I told you that I couldn’t go a day
without your touch,
Or the simplest things you share with me
mean so very much?
Have I told you that I’ve fallen, and I
don’t want to get up?
If I told you
that I need you
would that seem a bit abrupt?
When you’re in my arms
I feel there’s nothing I can’t do
Everything I am, I know
I want to give to you
When I hear my name falling from lips
When you touch me with your fingertips
I know
It ain’t wrong,
and I’m right where I belong
You and I seem meant to be together
I don’t recall how I ever managed apart
I’ve been having these same dreams now forever
The fire deep within me burns in some other heart
When you’re in my arms
I know there’s nothing I can’t do
Everything I am, I know
I owe it all to you
When I hear my name upon your lips
When you touch me with your fingertips
I know
It ain’t wrong,
and I’m here where I belong
Have I told you that I ...
Love you?
( a very special thanks to my editor ... "saving" me once again )
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2005-04-21 17:26:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:32:17 PM AEST (User
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beautiful. talented :D have a read of mine, tell me what ya think :) well done :D |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:33:29 PM AEST (User
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Naz this one rocks brings a sense of great happiness and warmth very romantic
Michelle |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:04:01 PM AEST (User
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This is awesome !!! It just touches me, I think it is beautiful and real.
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:46:24 PM AEST (User
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wow Nazzy, I have missed your poems a great deal, that was beautiful and well written, well done!!
pix xx |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:51:44 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully touching lyrics. I love songs like this; from the heart. You have done a great job with this.
Dove |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:21:59 AM AEST (User
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beautiful write, well done |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:05:40 AM AEST (User
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Scott, that was just beautiful and breathtaking.
You write you're lyrics that speaks to everyones hearts and i thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Oooh P.S. What show where you watching? It might inspire me to write something LOL.
Jane~ |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:11:29 AM AEST (User
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Wow Nazzy!!!
Thjis one poured out??!!!
Awsome job dude and if this is based on reality...you sure are one lucky guy!!!!
(sounds like she's lucky too!) |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:26:32 AM AEST (User
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It's a bad sign when Nazmythian falls in love.
Next thing you know, it'll happen to me.
Again.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by inoc on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:29:29 AM AEST (User
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Oh gee wizzzzzz.....it has been so long since I commented on your poems and I am feeling bad..*I am sorry* Hey, YOU are the one....the one true poet that pulls the strings to EVERYONES hearts....
thanks for being able to let us feel your talent...
cheers!~ |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:48:53 AM AEST (User
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Incrediably beautifull masterpeice.
I'm tounge tied from its beauty.
blub jus can't talk so mezmerizing.
Keep writing like this and you'll have the pick of the lot.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:52:15 AM AEST (User
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Oh, forgot, luv that picture. It's amazing what a person can see within a photo.
Huggs again,
emy |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:53:20 PM AEST (User
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Dear Naz,
Filled with depth of feelings, simplicity if beauty and this poem is loaded with beauty phrazes from the heart and depth of your soul.
My what a loving message to have conveyed to your love, and what a fortunate little lady she is to have such a romantic partner, thoughtful enough to tell her how you love her. If I was 40 years younger I'd be knocking at your door! *smiles*
Exquisite Delightfully tantilizing!
Warm Poetic Love
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:29:28 PM AEST (User
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Breathtaking piece me ol' mate.
Johnny. |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:21:03 PM AEST (User
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Wow. This is so much better than a dark write any day of the week. (Well okay, I'll admit to not being a dark write person.) Whatever/whoever inspired this, be sure and invite it back. So much better than most love poems one sees on here! (no offense meant, other people. heh) |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:30:16 AM AEST (User
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oh that is so great Nazzy.
wow so beautiful and sweet.
I didn't know you have a romantic soul lol.
SWEET.A true master piece.... |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:27:18 PM AEST (User
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I've read this so many times... and I still don't have anything worthy to say for such a gorgeous etude... Flawless... Exquisite till the very end, cheri... Wow, from dark write to a love poem... That person sure has a grip on that remote control! lol. Stupid, yes... Forgive me, sleep deprivation is not helping me... Anywho, divine, radiant, seven times brighter than the light of day... your talent, shall forever blind us. Merci beaucoup... for always sharing and revealing just a little of your soul. A harmonious melody...that all should sing. Bravo, my friend, bravo indeed. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/fan,
Stephy. *who notices that she had lots to say after all... ~Rambling Rose~* |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:47:34 AM AEST (User
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Absolutely beautiful picture adorned with quite refreshing very beautiful lyric..excellent Naz :-) venkat |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:31:36 PM AEST (User
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A truly good piece of romantic poetry is a wonderful thing, and this is that. Well done, old man.
Andrew |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 03:42:22 PM AEST (User
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Naz,
Beautiful picture really augments the wonder of your exquisite lyrics. Very romantic and captivating.
I never cease to be impressed by your talent.
Will, Terry |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 03:42:53 PM AEST (User
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Naz,
Beautiful picture really augments the wonder of your exquisite lyrics. Very romantic and captivating.
I never cease to be impressed by your talent.
Will, Terry |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 04:26:07 PM AEST (User
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What a beautiful poem! I could just imagine this as one of those lovely greeting cards with beautiful paper and wonderful colors....and the font would be a pretty script....It would be a great Valentine's Day Card too. Anyway, brilliant write.
Carol |
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:07:06 PM AEST (User
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~:*beautiful*:~ loved your intro note too, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Have I Told You ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:18:06 PM AEST (User
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There's some lucky woman out there!!
I love your flow... |
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