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Snow Covered Rose
Contributed by
Steven_Fenton1982
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The sun has just melted,
and the ocean is on fire.
The sky has just fallen,
and the world is so empty.
It's so silent here now,
there's no more war, there's no more hate.
It's so peaceful tonight,
but, freedom comes at a high price.
When the wind blows,
it doesn't find taking lungs anymore.
When the night comes,
theres no one to pick up the once
wished upon fallen stars.
Now there's nothing left alive,
but this snow covered rose.
Permanent winter all around,
but, one little flower still grows.
This snow covered rose.
Copyright ©
Steven_Fenton1982
... [
2005-04-21 17:18:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Snow Covered Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:29:31 PM AEST (User
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simply beautiful
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Re: Snow Covered Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:34:16 PM AEST (User
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A beautifully composed work of art. I loved
the message of the poem as well as the
stunning imagery.
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