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Again
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:55:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Could you love me again?
Hold me again?
After all that I have done.
Feel me.
Touch me.
Be your only one.
Would you keep me close,
Another time?
Dry my simple tears?
Trust me.
Love me.
After all these years.
Would you even give a damn,
Or just tell me to disappear?
Leave my heart behind.
Hate me.
Break me.
And watch me as I die.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2005-04-21 16:55:00]
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Re: Again
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:10:12 PM AEST
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| A good poem. |
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Re: Again
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:59:46 PM AEST
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Wow... that was amazing! Sad, but beautiful. I generally do not care for lost love poems, but the structure that you used made much more powerful and... well, better, for lack of a better word, lol. I hope things work out, hun! Talk to me!
*Naomi* |
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