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My Daily Pain
Contributed by
Cici
on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why doubt believing me
When I am the living proof of what's happened to me
Why would I go through all this pain
I wouldn't have anything to gain
Maybe none of you believe me
Maybe none of you can see the real me
This has effected me in a big way
I'm the one it's happened to I think I deserve a say
How can you sit there and say you believe me
When I can see through you see your lying to me
One day I will be able to cope better
But as for now I need all the help I can get
Unless you want me fade away
Far, far away into the devils mist
For you would not notice
As you don't care
But when you do, if you do
You'll be sorry
Copyright ©
Cici
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2002-12-24 15:00:00]
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Re: My Daily Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 06:40:33 PM AEST
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This was very good. I can relate to it a lot. Why we aren't given the choice of whether we're on anti-depressants is beyond me. Hang in there though I loved this poem. It spoke a lot to me...
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Re: My Daily Pain
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:34:50 PM AEST
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It amazes me how people think that their lies can't be seen through....i think people who disregard love like this are the ones who end up suffering in the end and they are the ones who have lost everything, thank you for sharing th is one i enjoyed it alot and i look forward to reading more of your poetry my friend.....Keep em' coming...
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Re: My Daily Pain
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:51:23 AM AEST
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| Fine fine your poem is fine. |
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