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Parthian Arrow
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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~*~
Ahh.. past love is dead
let the words be said
nary a tear filled eye
nor sad darkened skies,
~*~
forever to sit and write
by candle's unwithered light
spare me then until I die
leave no sad or happy sigh,
~*~
of lies and heart's frost
memories soft luster lost
there is no longer trust
may the love rot in dust...
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2002-12-24 14:30:00]
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 11:57:59 PM AEST
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A really good write,
I enjoyed this a lot
Hugz |
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by Aidan on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:52:42 PM AEST
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Wistful yet resigned, determined even; this poem evokes a strong emotion response.
Excellent. |
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 02:56:39 PM AEST
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Sad poem, but beautifully written.
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Ramfire |
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by wordsy on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:29:32 AM AEST
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Words well woven.
wordsy. |
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:04:14 AM AEST
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"forever to sit and write
by candle's unwithered light
spare me then until I die
leave no sad or happy sigh, "
I loved this stanza. You write so uniquely and deeply. I am in awe......Kie
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:05:53 PM AEST
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| Such an emotional write my dearest friend Nessa. Excellent. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by hray42 on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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| Ahhh.. I'm starting to see it now.. Especially with this poem.. You and I have very similar writing styles as well as format in punctuation, or lack there of I should say.. I try to keep it as simple as possible.. So seems you.. I did like this one.. Short, as well it needed to be.. It's a very nice poem.. Take care.... |
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Re: Parthian Arrow
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 04:29:51 AM AEST
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Nessa this is very sad and brought a tear to my eye. that last stanza was particularly poignant.
Memories soft luster lost.....
I will be thinking of that line for a long time |
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