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I've given up
Contributed by
spazz911
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:39:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Just because I don't see a point
doesn't mean I'd give up this *****
Just because this life isn't what I'd thought it would be
It don't mean I'd end it or that I'm coming clean
I'm tired of listening to all of the crap
and getting yelled at for saying anything back
I'm tired of waiting for what happens next
of sitting alone on a chair with no back
Watching the clock tick as time does go on
seeing the seasons change as it all goes wrong
Watching the day as life passes me by
wondering for the first time why I don't cry
No one is watching as tears streak my face
Seeing the driplets as I leave this place
No one is listening when I scream aloud
Yelling and hitting my fists on the ground
I've given up in loving for what happened next
One of us said no the other just left
I've given up on life and all that it means
There's no point in watching it rip at the seams
I'm so sick of feeling this pain in my head
wishing on giving up and on being dead
I'm so sick of explaing every thing that I do
As I watch you stalk off with all that you knew
Why did it have to end up like this?
With so many problems, they've all gone amiss
Why in the world did I end up on Earth?
Where no one could hear me alone since my birth
I've given up on living; I've given up on life
Spmeone please tell me what will end my strife?
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spazz911
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2005-04-21 08:39:38]
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Re: I've given up
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by Nomie on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:58:27 AM AEST
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Hope will...
I am hoping for my life that things will all get better for me. Am in much the same feeling as u. I am in much pain and turmoil. Stagnant...waiting...
Holding on to the last of the hope. And i know, if it all comes crashing to the ground around me, yes i shall die inside....but i look forward to being reborn.
And you should hold on to that thort...that when u are reborn, u'll be stronger, and all of what is hurting u now, u'll never let hurt u again. But u must die first, as i will. (not physically dying)....it will be losing ur old self, and obtaining a new one. ...more wiser....more alive...
That is all that can be left now. |
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Re: I've given up
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:35:07 AM AEST
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u know i love this poem... almost sounds like one of mine. but u do know that things are worse for so many ppl (ie sam)... think about how she deals... not very well but shes still alive. and you are still alive and i am still alive so we're all alive and... for me... thats a miracle. dont mislead ppl into thinking things that arent true. and if it is true u know u can tell me... ive done just about everything so i wont yell at you for nething. i just... i want to know casey... i need to know... dont leave me hangin...
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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