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Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:11:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Attraction
Lust
Desire
Such contemptible loathsome functions
Of ridiculous abhorrent human minds
Man-made diseases
Infesting and protruding
I have no need for your presence
I am made from Pure
Infinite Mathematical calculations
You leer with heinous satisfaction
In the Knowledge of your own perversion
Wallowing in it
Gets you off
I despise you all
You don’t fear what lies in hell
You are hell
You are made from hell
You are flickering images
Reflecting the worst of hell
Purity exists only in Mathematics
Keeping me safe
From the hell inside of you
Purity exists only in Mathematics
Keeping me safe
From the hell made from you
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2005-04-21 03:11:55]
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:58:50 AM AEST
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Mikey, that was just ming boggling.
Great way of writing this intense poem.
I loved it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by sandysandysandy on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:05:47 AM AEST
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I read, I comment. If I don't have time to comment, I don't read.
Your words the way you wrote the poem.. poetry.....
The content.. I don't like. I am on the mountain with pure joy that comes from the Lord, I read your poem and it wants to take the joy from me.. But I wont let it.
Maybe not your intention... like I said.. pure poetry. |
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by inoc on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:42:03 AM AEST
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So you are made from pure infinite Mathematical calculations....
an interesting write...
cheers!~ |
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:06:30 AM AEST
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I like your thinking here mike. Excellent job.
Johnny. |
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:43:57 AM AEST
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gosh well, thats interesting. i cant exactly put into words what this poem said to me (which is a good thing). great job, continue writing and ill continue reading.
jennie* |
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:58:33 AM AEST
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This is original and well written!!! I read it several times and I think it is exceptional!
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:19:08 AM AEST
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I love the original twist to this.
I, sorry to say have always felt that the mathmatics of the heart are definately a real thing!
Great write! |
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Re: Purity Exists Only in Mathematics
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:33:48 PM AEST
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| O-kay I take it all back You are brutal. This poem while it says some right things . . . Wow brutal. |
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