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She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Magic was reality and the world always looked pretty
She didn't know how to look without looking so deep
She didn't know how to love without loving too much
But she knows that when she hurts, she dies just a little
She sees the world in reds or she sees it in blues
She knows she loves you but she's not sure it matters
So she runs away into someone else's arms
Because over and over again, you're not there
There's so much she needs and so much you won't give
What she saw in you, no one else ever will
There's a lot of things she won't admit out loud
Like there's no one she'd rather be with than you
Maybe you love her and maybe you don't
I think you've forgotten the way it was
The way she used to always make you feel
How you used to need nothing but her love
She used to look into your eyes and
See everything she wanted in you
Everything she wanted you to be
'Cause you were already all of it
She's always known she'll never be
Everything that she wants to be
And without you she's incomplete
But she hasn't shed a tear yet
Now she's half the girl she was
And it's all slipping away
She doesn't believe in herself
That's what she needs you here for
She needs you to make her
The kind of girl that would
Never need anyone
For what she needs you for
She wishes she could
Keep herself in line
But she's so lonely
I bet you are too
So you're turning
From each other
Who knows how long
You'll play this game
Pretending
And lying
And loving
Through it all
Missing
Needing
Turning
From you
Just
Be
Her
Man
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2002-12-24 13:30:00]
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 02:45:40 PM AEST
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| this is so good...so sad...wow... |
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 03:13:27 PM AEST
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| Very nice write Moonlit :) |
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 03:50:34 PM AEST
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aw this is really good, and it kinda reminds me of what im goin through alittle right now, and ironically enough his names Greg too... thanks for sharing this, i REALLY liked reading it.
Mit Liebe und Umarmungen
°·•·*°·. Ali .·°*·•·° |
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by Haligh on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 10:06:07 PM AEST
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some of these lines reminded me of my current situation.
good writing. :-) |
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 03:33:27 AM AEST
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Wow1 You are a trully magnificant writer
this is sooooo beautiful. |
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by gina on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:40:41 AM AEST
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| that was really really sad and touching ....... |
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Re: She's Your Girl, She Loves You...And She's Lonely
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by Emmie74 on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:31:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, Dee.
Love the style too.
Always and forever,
Emily |
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