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Succulent Sap Dripping
Contributed by
jyssvw
on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:15:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Bread on the table
All is well
Sand in the shovel
A life-long tale
Meticulous design
A grand scheme
Fraudulent crime
Nothing is as it seems
Paralyzed movements
Stuck in time
Narcissistic delusions
One of a kind
Misleading maps
Lost all alone
Feeling trapped
Searching for a home
Concentrated efforts
Plotting an escape
Convoluted errors
Praying for the way
Watchful eyes peering
Closer then before
Weak hearts fearing
Cherishing those they adore
Chimney smoke rising
A lonesome cloud it forms
Cigarette and gasoline igniting
Forced to die then conform
Succulent sap dripping
The bark slowly bleeds
Proficient killers hunting
On hatred they feed
A path revealed
Is one unsafe
A dream once concealed
Remains in its place
Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2005-04-20 23:15:17]
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Re: Succulent Sap Dripping
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:57:00 PM AEST
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I Love this , it is so unique and well written. Great imagery!! I love the verse :
Chimney smoke rising
A lonesome cloud it forms
Cigarette and gasoline igniting
Forced to die then conform
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Re: Succulent Sap Dripping
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:46:57 PM AEST
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Ooh, I like this...
Watchful eyes peering
Closer then before
Weak hearts fearing
Cherishing those they adore |
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