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Let Love Begin
Contributed by
tiger_grl
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 10:50:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Take my hand and lead the way
Tell me all you want to say
whisper softly in my ear
all the things i want to hear
kiss my lips and touch my skin
bring out passions deep within
pull me close and hold me near
take away my pain and fear
in the darkness of the night
be my beacon, shine your light
In the brightness of the sun
show me that you are the one
give me wings so i can fly
for i can soar when your nearby
enter my heart, break down the wall
its time for me to watch it fall
ive been a prisoner, cant you see?
break my chains and set me free
strip me from my armors might
youll find i wont put up a fight
release my soul held deep within
im ready now let love begin.
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2005-04-20 22:50:55]
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Re: Let Love Begin
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by heartless_soul on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:16:46 PM AEST
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this was a very well writen poem, I lke how it read its flow and rythem were stady, but all that aside, do you truly know what you are saying to the younge people, it sounds like you are teling them to go with the one they are with and to leave all reason and consoquences behind... I am sorry if this seems rude of me but I just have strong feelings about this subject. forgive me. agsain this was well done.
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Re: Let Love Begin
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by emystar on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:21:57 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Let Love Begin
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by Tiger018 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:28:33 PM AEST
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OMG!
That is amazing. I can't believe you wrote that. You are an excellent Poetress. I love you with aLL MY heart.
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