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lamp
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
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Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
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How often do you see my lamps
though i may be dark
i see myself inwardly
above the realm of the eye sight
dark; dark; in the cloud
with no choice of taste
olasunkanmi rasheed igbalajobi
kanmmy2@yahoo.com
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olasunkanmi
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2002-12-24 12:00:00]
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Re: lamp
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 12:20:35 PM AEST
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Aww dark dark in the cloud with no choice of taste.....tha's sad ...i don't see you that way, i see you inwardly as though you are above the realm of the eye sight with your own unique choice of taste...Happy Holidays olasunkanmi my dear friend....Keep writing, i enjoy reading you..
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Re: lamp
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by EndEformEtrancE on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:30:53 AM AEST
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this is great, and i respect you a lot for keeping it short, it's so tempting to get carried away with this style of poem, and forgive me for saying this, but i felt that the length of the poem could be likened to the shortening wick of an oil lamp... thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful poem.
Lots of Love
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