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Take a moment
Contributed by
libra
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 10:13:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Take a moment to relize,
what's in front of you,
then understand what you have to offer.
If the world is a place to live,
then my heart is for you to dine on.
In twine i see you.
helpless and hopeless.
But in my arms is where you fit perfectly.
our lives together are romeo and juliet,
with unrelentless suspense.
The time will come when i ask you.
Copyright ©
libra
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2005-04-20 22:13:56]
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Re: Take a moment
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by sandysandysandy on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:31:34 PM AEST
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| what a lovely poem... |
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Re: Take a moment
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:46:09 AM AEST
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I adored this one!
From the opening to the end it was GREAT!
I like the way you express yourself in poetry.
Kie (Who plans on reading on) |
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Re: Take a moment
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by libra on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 12:28:00 PM AEST
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hey its me i love this poem it made me think...
i love you
~gina~ |
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