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Dove
Contributed by
Yecal
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 06:42:22 PM in AEST
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No one seems to care about what i have to say
I've been talking for months, and now it's almost May
I wonder if they even care about me
when will they be able to see
I need a true friend
some one who will understand
But I'll just sit here on my bed
Talking about my life and what I said
I don't hate
nor do i appreciate
But I do love
My symbol is a dove
Copyright ©
Yecal
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2005-04-20 18:42:22]
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Re: Dove
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:12:44 PM AEST
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awesome poem
i know EXACTLY how u feel and i liek how u related it to a symbol as a dove thats liek awesome. i loved this poem
of course of the poems ive read of yours ive loved all of them and i cant believe u r only 13
:D ~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Dove
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:46:07 PM AEST
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| okay your only 13 but you write from your heart that is what counts. i was told when i first started writing that my words will be my gate to life.. and in the many times i've needed someone i have found that my wriiting says it best... great job... tasha |
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Re: Dove
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by NeonHusky on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:09:11 AM AEST
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| i agree with the previous comment...it doesn't matter how old you are or the extent of yhour poetry...you pour something of yourself into every word adn that's what matters....it's what you feel and it makes you feel better releasing it...keep it up |
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