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Aching
Contributed by
weepingwillow
on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 05:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My lips thirst
But there is no water to be found
My eyes yearn for light
But darkness surrounds me
My voice begs to be heard
But my body is too weak to make a sound
My soul hungers for direction
But I’m lost on an endless sea
Everything I thought I had
Was never mine
Everything I ever wanted
Will never be
I’ve searched for what I lost
But that I cannot find
My dreams are as useless
As rotting fruit on a tree
My life as hopeless
As a flower before the first frost
Copyright ©
weepingwillow
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2005-04-20 17:25:38]
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Re: Aching
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by ArmyBrat on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 06:23:32 PM AEST
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| that is very wonderful it has alot of emotions |
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Re: Aching
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by greeneyes on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 09:51:15 PM AEST
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My thoughts are very mixed reading this. Take care.
Nancy |
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Re: Aching
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 10:07:19 PM AEST
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Wow ! This is expressed beautifully!! I felt you .Great write.
Leia |
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Re: Aching
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by fenris on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:49:12 AM AEST
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| incredible... now that is good stuff... real... thanks... |
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