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Mercy May
Contributed by
Pollo_Picante1120
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Mercy may mend this pain I feel
The pain that leaves me to conseal
Conseal my everlasting bleeding ache
My ache that caused my heart to break
This heart has never bled so much as now
And as of now I sit and dreadfully bawl.
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Re: Mercy May
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 05:10:47 PM AEST
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| know the feeling,wish i diddn't though.good write,keep it up |
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Re: Mercy May
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by tammysoleno on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 12:29:21 AM AEST
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edit some words out and it flows better
Mercy may mend
the pain I feel
it leaves me to conseal
my everlasting bleeding ache
the cause my heart break
it has never bled so much
I sit and dreadfully bawl. |
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Re: Mercy May
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:34:47 AM AEST
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everyone has felt this feeling - but they wish they have no idea what it is. but alas - we go through, get over it, move on
great write
~Bethani~ |
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