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Lost Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:58:02 PM in AEST
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I never say the signs she showed
I never dreamed my love would go
Now my hearts been griped and ripped apart
She stuck a knife straight in my heart
I had it all when I had her love
Now everything is dark and my life is done
She walked through the door and took it away
And now she’s laid me in my grave
I lay in the dark and start to cry
As all the pain fills in my eyes
Not much longer will it last
I’ll take my life and kill my past
I look to heaven to repent my sins
As I put the knife below my chin
I feel the rush of blood and pain
As my eyes begin to fill with shame
The end is near I can see it clear
Hell awaits I’m in His gates
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Re: Lost Love
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 02:01:17 PM AEST
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broke my heart with this one so full of pain and sorrow though your hurt hang in there there is someone out there that will love you the right way
Hugs for you pain
Michelle |
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Re: Lost Love
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by breny on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 05:19:53 PM AEST
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I know this feeling all too well. My year long relationship ended 2 weeks ago and yet I still feel the same pain you are feeling. Great write and very emotional :-D
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Lost Love
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:17:45 PM AEST
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| Another wonderful write steve... i love you style.. always soo deep and heart felt.. i only wish there wasn't so much pain in your words... |
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