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NOT MURDER
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:37:51 AM in AEST
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Crimson, Maroon, deep and red...
...My knife at hand and a gun...
...at your head...
Poisonous, Venom, Deadly and diesesed...
...my injection I shot into you...
...As you begged me, PLEASE!...
Danger, warning, Fortelling and knowing...
...I do not have a warning label...
...Although maybe it's just not showing...
Delicately, slowly, happily and sadistically...
...The knife moves to your heart...
...This isn't murder... technically...
Vanished, deceased, absent and gone...
...This is not murder because...
...You've already been dead to me...
...For so long...
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2005-04-20 07:37:51]
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Re: NOT MURDER
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by Concrete_Rose on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 09:49:59 AM AEST
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| Beautiful well-defined poem, i love it, it really made me think, great write :) |
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Re: NOT MURDER
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by GurlyTye on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:14:13 AM AEST
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| This gave me chills.. but a good write |
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Re: NOT MURDER
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:14:41 AM AEST
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i love poems that make me think....and this really is one that gets you thinking
this could almost be put under dark poetry
and i too, have someone who is dead to me. but that person still keeps trying, but you can't return from the dead |
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