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Dreams Of You
Contributed by
greeneyes
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:44:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I close my eyes
Thoughts of you
Our days are cherished
Held close in my heart
We have good we have bad
My thoughts are clear
My dreams are of YOU
Nancy
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greeneyes
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2005-04-19 21:44:10]
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Re: Dreams Of You
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 10:04:26 PM AEST
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Rythme and rhyme are very needed...the aspect of this is very shallow...never really thought out..a quicky..try again...
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Re: Dreams Of You
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 09:17:32 PM AEST
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I like it. I am sure to the right person it has much meaning.
The Voice
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Re: Dreams Of You
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by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:15:32 PM AEST
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Very nice.
Sweet.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dreams Of You
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:40:56 PM AEST
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Short, but very effective. Go get him...!
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Re: Dreams Of You
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:05:12 PM AEST
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so basic and easy to relate to
good work
sometimes people
can relate thier work soley to them
making the reader hard to relate to it
good job!
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