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hues of reddish blue
Contributed by
silentechoes
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:15:59 PM in AEST
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my eye intercepts what appears to be a reflection…
a nameless identity
with enough authority
to extract unfamiliar emotions
from within ones we thought we knew.
hues of reddish blue,
radiate the transparent night.
silent echoes linger,
dispersing their waves for others to hear.
a horrifying sight, familiar to the rearview mirror...
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silentechoes
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2005-04-19 21:15:59]
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Re: hues of reddish blue
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:20:29 PM AEST
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| you know its a bad sign when you read "hues of reddish blue" and start thinking of the chorophyll and accesory pigments in algae. excellent use of a beginning and ending. very nice substance as well. |
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Re: hues of reddish blue
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 10:33:46 PM AEST
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I liked this one alot..felt alot like a picture thats unable to be pictured...lol..great job
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Re: hues of reddish blue
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:00:35 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, silentechoes!
... and what a terrific first post. I do like this very much. There's enough here to make this interesting and thought provoking, but not so much that it becomes cliche or redundant. Excellent work.
Hoping to see more from you in the future,
SNM |
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