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Nightmares
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:03:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Oneday I'll wake up,
And everything I fear will be true.
I'll finally realize,
I'm living this life without you.
Maybe I'll cry so much,
I won't be able to quit.
I just can't accept the fact,
Our lock and key didn't fit..
I promise you this,
Oneday I'll cut so deep.
I'll be on such a low,
No valley more steep.
I'm afraid to look,
And see I'm all alone.
I may act independent,
But I'm terrified to be on my own.
To never find love again,
To never know something real.
To always be alone,
And never be able to truly feel.
Please tell me I'm crazy,
So I know there's an excuse.
For why I feel this way,
And why I put up with this abuse.
Whenever I try and climb out,
I seem to slip further away.
For once in my life,
I want things to go my way.
To never have to be sad,
Or never have to cry.
God, I wish I could be different,
I wish I didn't wanna die.
I don't wanna fear these nightmares,
I don't wanna pick up that knife.
But I'm in hell and I'm a sinner,
So I waste away in this hell called life
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Pats4eva7
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Re: Nightmares
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:25:47 PM AEST (User
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you have one of the best endings ive ever seen. life is about what you want. and since you dont want this, you will have to find a way to get what you want. the knife does not give you what you want, and the fear holds you back. |
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Re: Nightmares
(User Rating: 1 ) by greeneyes on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:51:07 PM AEST (User
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Wow, a good heart felt write, nightmares can be a problem.
Nancy |
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Re: Nightmares
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 02:13:36 PM AEST (User
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well done..... |
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Re: Nightmares
(User Rating: 1 ) by Twysted_Fate on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:39:25 AM AEST (User
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That has to be one of the saddest poems I've ever read.. its well done, keep up the good work, and hope things are going better... |
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