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100 addictions to suicide
Contributed by
injectionxinfection
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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6 pills in one day
25 bottles drunk away
30 days passed and missed
35 cuts across a wrist
40 poems of suicide
50 words of dying inside
52 bruises of self inflected pain
58 marks of unwritten shame
60 CDs of death and decay
75 books ripped up with dismay
79 Colored pencils cracked in two
88 people lied to by the truth
90 scratches and more unsought pain
and 100 tears to kiss it away
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pats4eva7 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:10:01 PM AEST (User
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OMG i loved that poem!!! I thought it was soooo incredibly good, the flow was amazing...this is definetly one of my favs |
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST (User
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wow, this is one of my faves too!! well done!!! |
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:55:26 AM AEST (User
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awsome idea and setup, love the line
"88 people lied to by the truth"
it just stood out. Very nice job.
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alina on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:42:02 PM AEST (User
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WOW! AWESOME! MAGNIFICANT! Such a simple poem yet full of so much talent! I'm amazed. What an interesting concept this was too. Great Job! Keep it up.
ALINA
"40 poems of suicide,50 words dying inside,100 tears to kiss it away"
those were the best lines
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Moon_Kitten05_07 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:03:13 AM AEST (User
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hey there are more than a 100 addictions to suicide an d i just though i would tell you what i really though about this poem. it was really great |
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by suicidal_imbecile on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:27:31 AM AEST (User
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Poem... Awsome... Words... So True,
good write! |
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Versigh on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:32:13 PM AEST (User
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Loved it! Awesome! It thought it was delicious how you added numbers in there.. brilliant! Keep it up! |
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Re: 100 addictions to suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:05:28 PM AEST (User
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This was excellant.. It was really good. I enjoyed reading it. The flow was brillant. I really loved this poem..
take care
christina |
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