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Contributed by
injectionxinfection
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:38:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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rape me
ravenous
.slut.
i wish you were dead
alone
taking
possesive whore
get away from me
truth hurts.
massive,
and i swear
I never wanted it to be like this
supposed to
responsibibility
***** high
going out of my mind,
.waiting.
after.
i waited until i couldnt see
you never came
I thought you would save me
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Re: Random
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:54:55 PM AEST
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| i think this would be better if it wasnt so fragmented and if the stanzas seemed to relate more together. each stanza seems so isolated from the rest of the piece. interesting word use also, one that the moderators might consider editing anyway. it is always best not to assume... |
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Re: Random
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:23:24 AM AEST
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| lol i love it, w00t, well done |
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