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Giving up Hurts the Most!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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Angels mourn crying, praying for your soul
as my eyes open from their state of sleep i feel my blood
turn into a frozen river
nightmares so close death was in the air

my heart locked shut, and i gave you the key
promise never to leave
as lies hold me, emptiness fills my broken heart
screaming your name hoping for a response,
silenced summer drowned by winter

to look in your face and realize the time we spent,
the chances I had have drifted away from my fingertips
your life, your thoughts, your dreams, your love
never tried my hardest and now i cry as the hurt enters

i love you and i still love you
even though i never showed it
a piece of me is gone forever

clutching memories held so close
repeating words of love spoken to late
my eyes look all around but all they can focus on is you
for in you i find me

days past by and thy death still lingers
this coldness will never satisfy me
i want to be surrounded by angels in a place
where the sun is so warm it burns my insides

surrounded by angels
where love takes my darkest depressions
and throws it into the deepest of seas
a place i can call home, i'm crying to you

mend me, break me, make me
you're all i've got now
my eyes look all around but all they can focus on is you
for in you i find me

farewell my love
your time has come
and never will i be able
to tell you i love you again!!

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-04-19 19:13:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Giving up Hurts the Most! (User Rating: 1 )
by brokengirl on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:19:38 PM AEST
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wow..great poem...*tear* its so good i personally love it. good work! i love your words...they just flow and sound so perfect.

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