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Too good to be true?
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The door swung wide open
"And where have you been?"
She smiled her pearly whites
and dragged me straight in.
Sitting next to me on sofa
Lovingly looking into my eyes
Gently kissing my face, I
let out contented sighs.
Dazzled by her beauty
in her trendy white suit
She models her outfit
asking "does this look cute?"
My eyes glaze over
cognitive processing dips
rolling her eyes she laughs
and plunges into my lips
Electricity charges every limb
in a tidal wave of fire
Seven years of waiting
eradicated by desire
"Oh, Natalie," I whisper
as her hands caress chest
"You're so fun, Jaycee"
Adding, "You are the best."
Love you I tell her and
around me arms lock
then alarm blares hatred
and I punch out the clock
* * * * *
Twenty minutes later
I wipe my eyes dry
so missing my REM state
Time again to cry
Copyright ©
Jaycee
... [
2005-04-19 19:01:43]
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Re: Too good to be true?
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:06:07 PM AEST
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awesome poem,keep up the great job!!
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Re: Too good to be true?
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:08:09 PM AEST
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wow... a total surprise ending. yet another great poem from one of my favorite poets. keep it up!
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Re: Too good to be true?
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:36:56 PM AEST
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*smiling*
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Re: Too good to be true?
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:18:32 PM AEST
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yeah, i have to agree with jennie... totally unexpecting that ending.... but it was an awesome poem. and the ending fits well, damn alarms. lol. sorry about the tears. don't cry... plz don't... makes me sad :( ... keep up the good work!
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