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I am a wound full of dirt
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am the empty bottle in your car,
I am your embarassment and your mistake,
When your running I am the "from"
I guess when your talking i am your tongue.
When you're screeching your lies, I am the "was",
Was i am, and you're currently annoyed,
When your hiding from the fear
I guess i am your evil and frightful nightmares.
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Re: I am a wound full of dirt
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by ROUGE on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:44:01 PM AEST
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LOVING THE TITLE, HOWEVER I WAS EXPECTING MORE, BUT SHOCK IS SOMETHING I LIKE WHEN IT COMES TO POETRY, SO GOOD ONE FOR YOU.
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Re: I am a wound full of dirt
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by ThornMEngla on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:14:56 PM AEST
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Wow, Great title and those first 4 lines are very good. You wrote a very deep poem. Good job
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Re: I am a wound full of dirt
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:28:16 PM AEST
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| I don't really understand this poem... maybe you could redo it and elaborate more on some things. Explain a little more?... |
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