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Keep your eyes closed
Contributed by
wolfman
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:06:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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Keep your eyes closed
Today I want to do something for you
Just know that we’ll sleep when we're through
You know that it’s our anniversary, yes
That’s why I’m not wearing anything under this dress
Here cover your eyes with this cloth band
Let me lead you around by your hand
We’ll go upstairs and from there
I’ll let you run your fingers through my hair
How gently we will touch our skin
And now time for the real fun to begin
Your hands explore the land you know
But without sight it’s hard to find where to go
It is beautiful to see you like this
Not knowing where to get the first kiss
As we lay naked and wet
We talk about the day we met
How it has been so long ago
When we didn’t quite know the flow
But here, now we have found it true
That the only one for me will be you.
“I cant say how much I love you.”
They kiss
“You don’t have to.”
Copyright ©
wolfman
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2005-04-19 16:06:30]
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Re: Keep your eyes closed
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:33:53 PM AEST
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Just a note: to all who read this, our anniversary was yesterday, and yes she knows that I have posted this, and is okay with it.
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Re: Keep your eyes closed
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:38:58 PM AEST
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"I am not back, just posting this"
*finds that funny, for some reason*
This is rather good, actually. None of it is quite over the top, but a few of the lines are a bit... hmm-hrghmm-ish. A bit overt. But good. And it's spelled right.
(liar)
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