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Escape the Matrix
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:59:32 PM in AEST
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Document the mind
Map psyche
Travel
Skipping upon
electrically stimulated synapses
Positively administer to
negative polarity
Hum
along as
closed circuitry shorts
Experience the burn
Smell decay
Taste
Begin again
Renew your existence
Sever the connection
Disengage from
artifice
Intelligence is -
Supposed to be real
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2005-04-19 15:59:32]
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:25:58 PM AEST
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Hey there Naz, I liked the poem....the last line is great!
You must have been looking for my intelligence because it took a long break today! The imagery was great...I could smell the decay....good job!
Carol |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:08:21 PM AEST
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| this was an intelligent piece of work - unusual style and the concept was brilliantly executed. top effort my friend. |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:31:19 PM AEST
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Always interesting to see
what you think.
"Reality" is sort of a Matrix tho.
There is no escape.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:00:09 PM AEST
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Sometimes taking that smoke break clears the mind and the most amazing thoughts come to pass...like this one.
You always amaze
Barkeep!
Larry |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 11:11:52 PM AEST
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| hmm... most interesting. "Renewing your existence". Oh, okay, that must be what I'm doing. heh. Fun write and good work! J. |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by b_rand on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:30:04 AM AEST
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| huge matrix fan here ... great stuff. good choice with the font as well |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:39:17 AM AEST
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| I am just amazed..beautifully wrapped. Venkat |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 02:15:54 PM AEST
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| Very unusual piece Nazzy but refreshing.awsome job dude, |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:48:23 PM AEST
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Wow that was deep, well written work. You sure er...ummm it was just a marlboro you smoked?!
Johnny. |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 03:32:25 PM AEST
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Hi Naz,
This poem is another tribute to your inventive creativity, with deeper meaning and intelligence. Great metaphor. I read it about three times. I guess it is about intelligence and thought process. I probably didn't grasp it all.
Superior work
Will, Terry |
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:52:11 PM AEST
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Now here's a pithy piece of work. Very inventive, font and all. Well done.
Andrew
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Re: Escape the Matrix
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by Arden on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
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oh look, a poem made up of nothing but big words.
how... deep.
i kinda rolled my eyes at the title. interesting to say the least. it was ok.
3/5 (sorry)
-Rebekah |
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