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Virgin Love
Contributed by
nos_bunny
on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Guardians, Defenders, Protectors of heart,
I grant thy power to rip mine apart.
Past to present, Honor to shame,
A token of absence, A sight of fame.
A love from another, Is a coil of rain,
Wrapped around my sins, I'm crying again.
I see a future, where there was no space,
I see your feelings when I look at your face.
Virgins of romance, A Theory for life,
My sword, My Kilt, My Ring, My Wife.
Give me a chance, I see the light,
Don't turn your back I wish to keep sight.
Touch me, Feel me, Consume my love,
As this is the first I've loved somone who fell from above.
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nos_bunny
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2005-04-19 14:41:44]
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Re: Virgin Love
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by Unbreakable on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:52:21 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. The way you express your love is so innocent, maybe even a little niave, and your feelings and openness toward it is beautiful. Very good write.
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Re: Virgin Love
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:35:17 PM AEST
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| I know what you mean. All too well ¬_¬ |
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Re: Virgin Love
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by Snookles on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:22:34 AM AEST
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| Because I know U wrote this for and about me, I am a bit lost for words.
What I can say is that I love you beyond all ur imagation and I am Eternily yours,
Snookles |
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Re: Virgin Love
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by ruthy on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:32:03 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem mj ,ruthy x |
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Re: Virgin Love
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by EROTICADARLIN on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:29:07 AM AEST
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| I ENJOYED READIN THIS! YOU EXPRESS YOURSELF WELL IN YOUR WORK. KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB!! |
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Re: Virgin Love
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by ruthy on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:40:10 PM AEST
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| Marcus!!! 82 people have viewed!!! omg ! *hugs* Congrats....ruthy xXx |
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Re: Virgin Love
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by PrissEru on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:17:54 AM AEST
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| Very good. I seen a lot of emotion into it. I like it very much. :D |
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Re: Virgin Love
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by Nos_Bunny on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:34:49 AM AEST
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| I guess this is my best poem I have for now guys -tries to beat the comments, reads and votes- |
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