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Rain
Contributed by
alexb
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 10:56:01 AM in AEST
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There's just something about the rain
The way it seems so angry
But still it remains beautiful
It's just something
I can't quite
Put my finger on
You are so confusing
So simple yet so confusing
As the rain falls
Drowning
Drowning
All the pain
All the sorrow
Drowning
Then coming back
Again tomorrow
To haunt me once again
Copyright ©
alexb
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2005-04-19 10:56:01]
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Re: Rain
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by bambamwhat on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 11:24:24 AM AEST
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I like this one very much, good job
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Re: Rain
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by Blank on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:06:00 PM AEST
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| This one is nice and simple. You carry the emotion very well. Good One! (please comment on one of mine!) |
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