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No Comparison
Contributed by
InexactExactness
on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mute yourself
There's nothing to say
Breathe in
Give it all away
The body runs wild
No comparison to ever know
Shake down
Let it all die away
Free care
Shame just left today
Out the front door again
No comparison to ever know
Anger passion
Believe in it all again
Leave me
You give me your deadly sin
The life always runs
No comparison to ever know
Your faith
Drowns the deepest place
My love
Covers my ugly face
The feelings always complain
No comparison to ever know
Love me
Please my lonely fears
Comfort you
I'll wipe away your tears
Love will always last
No comparison to ever know
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InexactExactness
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2002-12-23 23:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No Comparison
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 02:10:24 AM AEST (User
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Dear InexactExactness @-<-<<_
A Beautiful write and a rose of a poem.. loved it..
Your writing friend,
Always Nessa |
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Re: No Comparison
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 03:00:34 PM AEST (User
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this is such a beautiful poem...the best one i have read all night...wow...i loved it so much... |
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Re: No Comparison
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 04:09:45 AM AEST (User
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Really really really great. What can I say it appealed and was well great! |
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Re: No Comparison
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 02:43:14 PM AEST (User
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Ah this is beautifully written, the way you put so many emotions into this write ..it truly has a style of it's own....and it's uniquely written ....keep writing my friend i enjoy reading your poetry deeply....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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