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Post Suicide Depression
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:18:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Jumping I did not
as I was told
But life is no better
my heart is still cold
Longing for contact
with a woman so sweet
In so populous a world
we'll never meet
They say someone's out there
don't give up and be ready
They assume that I'm so
normal and not so unsteady
Seven years since I've been kissed
a meaningful one longer
What they say about absence
does not make me stronger
Once in a while I do see her
Beauty beyond measure
The sparrow was right
there's all kind of treasure
Incoherency stumbles out
I'm so totally flushed
With the gal of my dreams
I feel so totally rushed
Not without surprise she
strides purposefully away
Another failed attempt
marked on calendar today
They say someone's out there
you expect me to believe
of this cold, callous world
I am ready to leave
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-04-19 07:18:29]
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Re: Post Suicide Depression
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by edwynne on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:18:43 AM AEST
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| real nice poem man, i totally know how you feel, check out some of my stuff, where in the same boat. |
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Re: Post Suicide Depression
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by bambamwhat on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:07:02 AM AEST
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| I can very well associate, with this... well done |
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Re: Post Suicide Depression
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:52:35 PM AEST
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great poem i loved it... except i havent ever had nething ever, i have never experienced a love that went both ways. hell ive never even been kissed once. ppl say its better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all... i disagree. love hurts, its the plain truth. i think with love comes pain, like a package deal. to get the good you've got to overcome the bad. i dont know, its just how i see it. but what do i know, i havent lived long enough to have such wisdom. but i loved the poem... great work.
jennie* |
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Re: Post Suicide Depression
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:34:37 PM AEST
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You made the right decision, JC....and someday...you'll meet the girl of you dreams...(one who is available) :>)
Who knows..you may have already met her and not know it....
Crazy Jenni |
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