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Dark Desire
Contributed by
Shishke_Bob
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:09:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Dark desire
I lick my lips
Caress my hips
Just wishing you were there
I smell your aroma
It sends me in to a coma
The weight of you I’d gladly bear
Your texture your feel
Your smell your appeal
I need you in the worst way
Dark, glossy shine
I’ll make you mine
You will make me happier than gay
It is a sin what you do
Causing all to desire only you
But away from you I will not budge
Until you are ready
I will be steady
When will it be done, the fudge?
Copyright ©
Shishke_Bob
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2005-04-19 02:09:48]
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Re: Dark Desire
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:16:35 AM AEST
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Great write ! but here i was thinking you were talking about....somthing else lol
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Re: Dark Desire
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:30:31 AM AEST
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| I have had these same thoughts about someone. It's like I had u write this for her. I like it. |
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Re: Dark Desire
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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Very cute. Luv your sense of humor.
huggs,
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Re: Dark Desire
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:02:02 AM AEST
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I like the thought of the poem but in some places it feels like you've cut some parts out.
I dont get the poem, sorry. It just might be me *shrugs*
Jane~
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Re: Dark Desire
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 11:59:31 PM AEST
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Haha I didn't get this at first, but this was
really good. You get a 10 out of 10 for
uniqueness and I also like how it was written.
I'm glad I read this since it is good to read
different stuff every now and then.
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Re: Dark Desire
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:01:12 PM AEST
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Shish, you've got issues. I mean there's obsession and all that, but then there's this, and this is like stalking scary, or something like that. You have to have patience. It'll (She'll???) be ready for you on its own time. About 45 minutes? Something like that.
Anyway, I do like your writing style, if you get more 'poems' (sacrilege!) out there, I might just become a fan. Keep up the... the work, the...good work. There I said it.
Gosh I ramble. It's longer that your poem, almost.
Take care, Ke.
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Re: Dark Desire
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:55:05 PM AEST
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lmao!!!!!
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Dark Desire
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by freckle on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 06:46:54 PM AEST
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Oh too cute! You really had me there....all the way 'til the last line! Very, very good. I think this is a brilliant piece of prose....now about that fudge....I live in Florida..... : )
Carol (A confessed chocoholic) |
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Re: Dark Desire
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:34:48 AM AEST
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| Ah...I got you..."fudge" eh...*wink wink*...*nudge nudge*...you perv. |
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Re: Dark Desire
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:19:16 PM AEST
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Well done..I have a few of this type of poems myself....
I enjoyed this
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