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It's Not Him!

Contributed by mysterious on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:46:21 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

It took us three years to build a friendship, one that was strong enough to hold on its own,
It wasn't a mistake, I don't regret it, but the friendship we built was all on for show,
Actually I'm not sure, if thats true,
I wonder if he misses it, just like I do?
For four months now its all been guesses,
He says he wants something, but he won't learn from his lessons,
He turns away or is blind to the fact, that I know I don't want him I finished that pact,
It's just driving me crazy, its something he lacks,
He expects to get what he wants, but life doesn't work like that,
He lacks to recognise, not everyone has his back,
He talks himself up to much, and that puts people out,
Does he really expect to make new friends, when he talks about something he knows nothing about?
Friendship is built on trust and honesty, and every other relationship for that matter,
Is he gonna work hard? Does he want to reach the top of the ladder?
Every person that means alot to me is sitting up there,
But he won't make the effort to take the next step, I don't know what it is, is he scared?
To make a mistake, ha, he's already made loads,
But maybe he doesn't realise, he's following the wrong roads,
I know I can help him, he hasn't found that yet,
He can't see the people that love him, just want to help, he thinks its just some bet,
that once he lets loose all he's darkest secrets, we'll leave him in the dark, and its all set,
For us to make a fool of him, but it aint no net,
I know to much already and he isnt gonna get caught,
Because I'm not that kind of person, its not my kind of sort,
I'll take one last chance, to redeem what we had,
To build that friendship back up,
Because what he did, wasn't that bad!

Copyright © mysterious ... [ 2005-04-19 01:46:21]
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Re: It's Not Him! (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:36:13 AM AEST
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He not so bad. friendship is forever... wrong or right just being there as a friend. the poem is ok. good luck

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