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Dear Guest, Love Ghost
Contributed by
InexactExactness
on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't expect much from me
I don't have much to give
But if you need a place to stay
You're welcome to be my guest
The place is such a mess
For such a pretty smile
If you allow me I shall clean up
And make it worth your while
Just ignore the needles there
Just ignore the mirror
Just ignore my lonely friends
The ones with golden scissors
It may look dim and it has no light
But this room has life of it's own
Here's the match for candle light
Illumination makes it grow
The bed's still the same
As it always will be hereafter
I know you're one of elegance
But tonight we'll be with laughter
Break from your shell
This isn't home
This is a care free place to stay
It's alright nothing goes wrong
The smiles will never decay
Unwind yourself have a drink
Lay your sweet lips on me
The liquor speaks to you in different tongues
Once wound now set free
Love me hate me tonight is over
It's time for you to leave
I know that you must so there you go
But here is my master key
When and if you ever come back
Know that you are always welcome
When and if you find your back
My ghost will always be here
Copyright ©
InexactExactness
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2002-12-23 22:40:00]
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Re: Dear Guest, Love Ghost
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:48:07 PM AEST
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| This was a really good write,I like the flow in this! Christina |
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Re: Dear Guest, Love Ghost
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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this is such a good poe, i really like the way things move in this poem... thanks for sharing it, and definitly keep them comming.
Mit LIiebe und Umarmungen
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Re: Dear Guest, Love Ghost
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 02:31:10 PM AEST
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Welcoming the ghost as such to drink from your home of pain...to dwell in the beauty of the darkness this prevails....ah..that is breathtaking the way you wrote this one...i love this write...i think this is one of my favorites that you've written....and i intend on reading every single one of your poems....thank you for sharing your beauty...
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