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When Nothing is Left

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The crucifing pictures
Better off unpainted

The martyred words
More fitting unwriten

The extorted hues
More suitabaly achromatic

The chafing positism
Better exceedingly cynic

The sinfully pure
More surpassing stained

The falsly genuine
Better sensibly unfeigned

The tortured life
More aided by death
...
In the sence
That the end comes
When nothing else is
Left












Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-04-18 21:09:54]
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Re: When Nothing is Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:47:04 PM AEST
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this is better than you think. makes me think that you got some of your ideas from my poems, or the naming of one anyway =] i really liked this for the substance and the rhymes.


Re: When Nothing is Left (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:55:08 PM AEST
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i like it...a lil confusing but still really good...
~kc~


Re: When Nothing is Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:14:41 PM AEST
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This is excellent expression, rather powerful. There is quite a lot to think about here.

Well done.

Andrew


Re: When Nothing is Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:51:47 PM AEST
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I'm with spazz911 on this. There are some powerful thoughts to consider, but I'm not sure of the message. Or maybe just considering the thoughts is the message...


Re: When Nothing is Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 11:42:17 PM AEST
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Oh, I do like this! I prefer a poem that prods the reader to thinking... wondering... considering - and this most certainly does that. Sometimes, indeed, saying less is giving more.

Well crafted. Keep writing!
~SNM~


Re: When Nothing is Left (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:08:29 PM AEST
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I like your thought process in this write Clark. It's kind of abstract and veiled, the emotions are strong nonetheless.
This poem kind of sounds like a bit of a self struggle to me.
Good read, thank you!


Scorp.




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