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FOLLYWOOD
Contributed by
diatribe
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Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Stick that finger down your throat
Little girl and show us who’s pretty
So we can plaster your face
And expose your ribcage
All over this city
Like a two dollar hooker
With a fifty cent smile
But I’d gladly pay an even three
If only you’d touch me a while
Just look in my eyes beautiful princess
I can buy you that over-the-counter happiness
And you’d never again ruin that make-up
With those pesky tears of yours
Would you like that my little glamour whore?
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:31:00 PM AEST
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| sick |
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by FlirtQueen on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:08:14 PM AEST
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| I understand what you meant and I don't think it was sick, I think it was courageous of you to write that. Good Job! |
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:11:08 PM AEST
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| didnt mean any offense, everyone should be entiltled to write what they feel, i just felt sick, not at the write, but at the image |
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by Diatribe on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:17:20 PM AEST
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| i agree... it is sick! that's why i wrote it... with all of the images we see everywhere that encourage young girls to turn belimic just so they can compete with the pretty "models." are these girls really the models of beauty? should they be? and the people who employ them... all they want is to make a few bucks by exploiting these girls. and they know that anytime they gain a pound their career is over. and some girls will do almost anything to persue that image and the male's in charge and with the money take advantage of that, using and abusing |
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 11:48:12 PM AEST
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| awesome write, well done |
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by Wilder on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 04:28:31 PM AEST
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| There's alot of graphic imagery there. If only some of these Hollywood execs could read this! |
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Re: FOLLYWOOD
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 06:24:22 PM AEST
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| Superb |
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